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How big the sky. How blue the sea. How mysterious the me.

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« Thread Started on Aug 21, 2007, 8:58pm »

Leave all comments here! Tell me what you think

« Last Edit: Sept 1, 2007, 5:49pm by timeless »

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Brevi tempore - [bre-wi tem-por-ay] soon, in a short time.

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~Dreams come to one person, one person alone. That's why dreamers are lonley~

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Re: Comments! [sticky please]
« Reply #1 on Aug 22, 2007, 2:45am »

Ooh, interesting first page. That must have been painful to write illiterate. xD Hehe, good effect though, it sets the scene. Can't wait to see more!

-Oh, and I have stickied it for you too. ^^

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There are many worlds, but they share the same sky. One sky, one destiny. ~Kairi

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« Reply #2 on Aug 25, 2007, 11:16am »

Ah, so sweet, Timeless. Love it so far...sort of reminds me of "Flowers for Algernon." ^^

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« Reply #3 on Sept 1, 2007, 8:36pm »

(Double post=yuck!)

Loved it! It would have been nice to see you dwell on the emotions a bit more, but it was happening fast, so yeah...^^' I thought the descriptions vivid and interesting. And I love the theme of this story!

(Gosh, this reminds me of Stardust. An excellent movie and story, I highly recommend it! ^^)

*hugs story*

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Re: Comments!
« Reply #4 on Sept 2, 2007, 4:06am »

Wow, that was great! I love the way you're writing this Timeless. It's such an interesting story too!

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